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SweetBritt and Chubbers

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My wife and son's OC's. I remade one of my favorite pieces for them.

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Okay, critique time. This is very cute and a pretty good piece. I don't know ho wlong you've been at this, but it looks nice. Now, the regular, 2D coloring looks fine, but it clashes with the 3D, shaded heart. That's more of a personal preferance on my part, I just don't like that kind of clash. Now, the color scheme on your wife I really like, but the kid... again, personal preferance. You used complimentary colors, which I comend you on, but Christmas has somewhat biased me with its overused of red x green. Anatomy wise, your wife's thighs are very thick compared to the rest of her leg, and the forelegs are too skinny. You should also narrow the neck a bit more. Both of their eyes are too small and too high, try making them about 1.5x bigger and moving them to be around nose level. Finally, your wife's ear is too small and connected to the top of her head, it should attatch to the back. Keep practicing, like you told Halluxx!